Monday, June 05, 2006

More Songs

I was digging through some stuff the other day and found this song that I wrote a few years ago. My brother and I used to do it as a duet -- he on mandolin, me on guitar. I sang most of it and he chimed in on the parts you see in parenthesis, as well as providing the "voice" of the prodigal son that you see in italics mid-way through the song. Good times. It was a medium-slow waltz with a Celtic-vibe melody.

EMBRACE

A young man, rebellious and quarrelsome
Thought he'd have more pleasure out on his own.
He said, "Dad, I'm leaving -- give me what is due.
Your place is too stifling so I'm through with you."

The father cried (his heart broken)
Say, "Goodbye," (the world is open)
And deliciously wild
For a reckless, rich child.

Strong drink and loose lovers
Sure loved his loose change;
So did his companions, who always arranged
To be right beside him for nights on the town.
Much dancing and laughter, then he'd buy them a round.

Gradually (he grew poorer)
Couldn't pay (for much more)
More desparate each day --
His friends slipped away.

His ruin complete, he begged for his bread;
Many's the day he wished he were dead.
He couldn't blame false friends -- he'd been false too.
He thought of his father's heart, broken in two.

I had a family, but I can't go back.
My father knows all the strength that I lack.
And why should he want me, or welcome me home?
But where could I go?
Where else could I go?


As he tops the last hill home, who first should he see
But his own father -- and then their eyes meet.
The son's eyes grow teary, so he looks to the ground.
Although he can't see now, he still hears the sound

Of his father (come running)
Joyful shouting (and running)
Did he somehow forget
Hateful words his son said?

The father approaches, the son starts to bow,
Chin starts to quiver, eyes still on the ground.
The father says "Son, I've been counting the days!"
Then ... they embrace.

The father says "Son, I've been counting the days!"
Then they embrace.

9 Comments:

At Mon Jun 05, 07:22:00 AM PDT, Blogger Lorie said...

I like it. Why haven't I heard this one yet?

 
At Mon Jun 05, 11:49:00 AM PDT, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Bobby, I love this! It's simple, honest and emotional.
What if you did it blues or bluegrass?

'He couldn't blame false friends -- he'd been false too.' -great line

 
At Mon Jun 05, 01:11:00 PM PDT, Blogger Lorie said...

I could hear it as something along the lines of a Derek Webb or Jars of Clay "sound", too. The possibilities are endless!

 
At Mon Jun 05, 03:02:00 PM PDT, Blogger Tim Rice said...

Neat! I bet it sounded good, too, with a Celtic-vibe melody.

 
At Mon Jun 05, 04:02:00 PM PDT, Blogger Bobby said...

Milli, you blog-lurker, thanks for commenting! We Grisman-Dylan-Watson lovers have to stick together. It's a dangerous world out there. A world full of Spears's and Timberlake's. Ick. But anyway, I played acoustic guitar on this and my bro played mandolin. It did have a bluegrass-celtic feel, similar to some of Nickel Creek's stuff.

Tim: thanks! I love Celtic melodies. My brother contributed a great little recurring mandolin lick to the song that really made it cool.

Lorie: You haven't heard it because it was part of a song cycle that I wrote, along with several that Scotty wrote, before you and I met. They were all written for duets, and there are a lot of lines where one part bleeds over/ into the other guy's line, so I can't really perform them solo.

Plus, they were in a binder under my bed. Outta sight, outta mind.

 
At Tue Jun 06, 08:04:00 AM PDT, Blogger Tom said...

I dunno I see it sung something like "Cat's in the craddle" it seems to have that same effect to me.

 
At Tue Jun 06, 10:03:00 AM PDT, Blogger Katie said...

Great song, captures the prodigal heart of us all.

"Although he can't see now, he still hears the sound Of his father (come running)"

I like that line the best.

 
At Tue Jun 06, 12:47:00 PM PDT, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Blog-lurker-LOL. I like it- sounds like the cyber villian from the Superfriends.

 
At Wed Jun 07, 05:25:00 AM PDT, Blogger Bobby said...

Actually speaking of nicknames, I think we could turn you into a star by licensing a series of dolls that would each look like you but have a different "spin," so to speak. You know kind of like Barbie, Malibu Barbie, Army Barby, whatever.

There could be Frilly Milli, who likes to dress up in nice clothes and go to balls. And Silly Milli -- squeeze her belly and she tells jokes. And Chilly Milli who comes in a big parka and sky mask, folding her arms as if she's freezing. And of course Milli Vanilli, who lip synchs. And finally, the Really Milli, which looks like regular you.

I think this could be the Christmas hit of the season.

 

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